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loved him
longer than the horizon wide like my opened eyes showed fire: .. exposed my inner god ... loved him - hard desired dope divinity lungs lusted large tokes to me he was holy & high hopes won't half step w/hearts happiness nope. tithe was life for faith it felt a fair price now i just get the sense its all very ...past tense our experience fell victim to immense fathoms emotional horrendi..hideous we morphed into myths love is evanescent -frisson passion... worship fictitious- light years measure distance not time & the speed of sound distorts rhyme. . . . . . . 
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Posts: 508 (04/13/09 12:11:37) Family Member |
very nice. enjoyed the read. deep
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What struck me was the beautiful imagery that makes your imagination run wild! It really is a beautiful piece!
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emotional horrendi..hideous
we morphed into myths love is evanescent -frisson passion... worship fictitious- *********** horrendi....hidious.. *clapping at use of latin for suked* what is evanescent? sounds dangerous.. the frisson passon and worship fictitious... that's the part that stings a little.. this reminds me of ....beat poetry. you are my new beat poet.. *genuflecting* 
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- Hey Now! What's Shakin?
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- Shameless Plugs
- Does It Work?
- Amberly's Metaphorical Palace
- PassionPoet's Poetry Paradise
- The meaningless madness of mybossisafatbitch
- Mamacash
- Celestial Dancer
- Disillusioned
- ThaElement
- Arionojovan Labu Writing's
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